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SILENCE

I'm deafened by the silence i find
When i ask for a piece of your mind
You'll chat with me politely
But i know you tread lightly
As the eggshells crack underfoot

I'm just looking for a sign
A sign that you could be mine
Should i continue to wait
Or is it already too late?

My feelings are too strong to be wrong
I know in my soul it's with you i belong
You must feel something
Or have i totally misread this?

I'm thankful you're my friend
But i want so much more
So don't tell me it's the end
When my heart's on the floor
Surrounded by the remains of the shells
That have fractured and resigned me to hell

I've waited forever and i just can't let go
Unless i can plunge into the endless depths of you

D
©2008-2009 ~Doodle-777
:icondoodle-777:

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Silence can be deafening...

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:iconharukittychii:
OMFG!
that is flippin amazing!
I love it so much!
wish i could write like that
AWESOME JOB!

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Life is short, go out and live it
No regrets
Never look back
Never stopping
:icondoodle-777:
You're very kind, glad you like it :)
:iconeager4damnation:
this is truly inspiring piece! i absolutely love it! please continue writing things like this!

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~~XXxxXxX Singing in the rain can kill you XxXxxXX~~
:icondoodle-777:
thanks! i'll totally try, i have no idea where i get this stuff from though...
:iconeager4damnation:
well at least when you try... you succeed! nice job!

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~~XXxxXxX Singing in the rain can kill you XxXxxXX~~
:icondoodle-777:
trust me - i have to reject loads of ideas before i settle on something i like! lol
:iconeager4damnation:
well keep up the good work!!

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~~XXxxXxX Singing in the rain can kill you XxXxxXX~~
:iconharukittychii:
tis no problem at all ^_^
you're very talented

--
Life is short, go out and live it
No regrets
Never look back
Never stopping
:iconwarlian:
This reminds me of something im going through 5/5

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